The fish died because it wasnt able to move and fishes need to move to breath. The Snake died to but the frog didnt. The boy monk learned a lesson not to abuse animals. In my life I learned lessons to. I feel horrible about the boy monks way to have fun. The boy monk is real naughty and rude. I feel bad about the animals he abused. I wonder if the animals had a difficult time or not.
I hope the boy monk learned a lesson not to abuse animals. Here is an example about me when i learned a lesson. I was messing around in the house with a ball when my mom told me to stop. I kept playing with the ball when all the sudden the ball went out of reach and hit a picture frame. I was sad that i broke the picture frame and didnt listen to my mom. Another example, is when I was bouncing a ball on the top of the stairs when it rolled down and hit a lightpost on the wall where the glass started falling. i tried to move but I was to shocked and couldnt move to catch it. Then of course the glass broke. My last example : I was cleaning up my dogs mess when I wasn't paying attention and had an attitude. When I bumped the glass half full vinegar. As it hit the ground i started to panic with my brothers help i got cleaned quickly.
From the movie i learned the boy monk was naughty and learned a lesson. I also learned a lesson to listen to my mom and not to play with the soccer in the soccer field. I get in trouble sometimes because i don't listen or do something wrong what im not supposed to do.
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This is a good essay but you need to add more to it. You should write 450-500 words. The structure also needs work. Each example you give should be written in a new paragraph.
ReplyDeleteWhen you use the pronoun "I", it also needs to be capitalized. Good luck!
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